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Episode 33 - Giggling Snowballs

Works in Progress

[00:00:35] Mike is working on Zero Ward but won't get NaNoWriMo done as he's only 18k words in. So he's not going to stress himself out trying to get it done.

Mike's story Rotgut did not win the MashStories competition for which he had been shortlisted. We're still proud of him!

John is at 13k, so even Mike has him beat in the NaNos.

Eric is making great progress on Don't Wake Up as well as some updates to Prince of Pigeon Hill as he's getting it ready to get back out to agents.

What's happening online

13 Things I Learned about Writing Faster

[00:02:09] Veronica Sicoe wrote 13 Things I Learned About Writing Faster. Apparently John doesn't follow any of them. Because he's slow.

Her advice:

  1. Make writing your Top Priority
  2. Writing first thing in the morning is HUGELY helpful
  3. Having a great outline is half the victory
  4. Your first outline isn’t necessarily a great outline
  5. What gets measured gets managed
  6. Separating decision-making from typing does the trick
  7. [Placeholders] are your [friends]
  8. Social media isn’t
  9. Perfectionism is the death of creativity
  10. Celebrating progress is VITAL
  11. Conversational tone is the fastest to write and the easiest to read
  12. Knowing “it can be done” is a great motivator
  13. Life doesn’t care about your writing time

Microsoft commissions science fiction inspired by its research

[00:04:05] Future Visions is a Microsoft sponsored science fiction anthology where the company invited authors to come in and see some of the technologies the company is working on, and use that as a springboard for works of fiction. Ann Leckie, Seanan McGuire and Greg Bear were a few of the authors who contributed. It's pitched as "original fiction inspired by Microsoft. There were no qualifications for the authors to use specific Microsoft technologies in the fiction, but the stories did inspire stories about machine learning, deep neural networks, and Skype Translation.

The anthology is available for free on Amazon.

Sources:

  • http://www.theguardian.com/books/2015/nov/19/new-program-microsoft-commissions-science-fiction-inspired-by-its-research
  • http://news.microsoft.com/futurevisions/
  • http://www.theverge.com/2015/11/17/9752138/microsoft-sci-fi-anthology-future-visions

Bad Sex with Morrisey

[00:05:31] For the past 23 years, the Literary Review awards the "Bad Sext Prize" to “to draw attention to poorly written, perfunctory or redundant passages of sexual description in modern fiction, and to discourage them... the most egregious passage of sexual description in a work of fiction”. This year, the musician Morrisey came away with the prize for his

“Eliza and Exra rolled together into the one giggling snowball of full-figured copulation,”

"Eliza’s breasts barrel-rolled across Ezra’s howling mouth and the pained frenzy of his bulbous salutation extenuating his excitement as it smacked its way into every muscle of Eliza’s body except for the otherwise central zone."

Sources:

  • http://www.latimes.com/books/jacketcopy/la-et-jc-morrissey-bad-sex-in-fiction-award-finalist-20151118-story.html
  • http://www.theguardian.com/books/2015/nov/17/bad-sex-in-fiction-award-2015-morrissey-goes-head-to-head-with-erica-jong

What It's Like Being a Self-Published Author

[00:06:46] What It's Like Being a Self-Published Author looks at four anonymous authors and the successes they had in self-publishing.

Homemade Guns

[00:08:08] If your novel requires some research on weapons, you may find Homemade Guns an interesting research site. Guns are a relatively simple device at the basic level (you can make one out of a bamboo pole or piece of pipe). This site shows and discusses various guns built from scratch.

Bond, James Bond.

For Our Eyes Only is a review of the book The Man with the Golden Typewriter, a biography of James Bond creator Ian Fleming edited by Fergus Fleming. The book is a collection of letters between Ian Fleming and his publishers, friends, readers and fans. Ian Fleming was interested in becoming famous, and wasn't beyond using his contacts in the news media to get good reviews of his books.

Reading Spotlight

John started reading Joseph John's first novella The Eighth Day which is about to come out as a paperback.

Tech Focus - Plotist

[00:12:39] Plotist is a tool by software developer Jay Cano.

With Plotist, you start by creating a story. For each story you add characters, locations, objects and events. You create a timeline of your story. You pull in characters and locations onto your timeline. On the timeline you add the events that correspond to your story. This allows you to visualize your plot in a very beautiful way.

It's still in beta, but Jay is improving it nearly daily.

Amazon Storywriter

[00:15:18] Storywriter is a new tool from Amazon for screenwriters. This cloud-based app allows writers to create their screenplays in a standard format and bypassing expensive industry software like Final Draft.

When completed, creators can submit their scripts to Amazon Studios. They can then option your screenplay to become a series or film for Amazon Video.

celtx is a free script writing tool Eric has used to write some scripts. The free version doesn't include a lot of budgeting and scheduling features a professional (paid) account does, but the screenwriting features are always free.

John had the idea that Amazon should create their own version of Scrivener next to allow authors to write and publish their manuscripts directly to Kindle.

Craft Talk

[00:22:06] Gotta Read It! - Five Simple Steps to a Fiction Pitch That Sells by Libbie Hawker

Blurbs, product descriptions, query letters… no matter what you call them, they’re a chore to write. And yet the success of any novel can depend on its pitch. In this short, instructive ebook, Libbie Hawker takes the pain out of pitch-writing and shares the secrets of a perfect fiction pitch. Whether you’re an indie writer seeking to improve sales of your self-published novels or an author hoping to hook your dream agent with a can’t-resist query letter, GOTTA READ IT! Is the ebook for you.

What you need to cover:

  • Character
  • Desire
  • Antagonist
  • Struggle
  • Stakes

This ties back into things we talked about in Loglines.

Mike picked up a book on Kindle First book selection called Daughter of Sand and Stone written by Libbie Hawker. It's not a genre he'd normally purchase, so she must be doing something right.

Updated by John Uhri over 3 years (view history)
Episode 32: Benevolent Dictation Episode 34 - Destroyer of Words

Contents

    About Writing Advice and Quotes Dealing with Distractions Planning World Building Naming your Characters Writing Tools Word Count Tools Tracking changes Editing Your Work Critiques Beta Readers Info Dumps Author Websites Twitch writers Book trailers Books we talk about (Reading Spotlight) Commonplace books
    Show Notes
    Episode 7 - Puppetmaster Mike Episode 49 - Takedown Episode 48 - We Quit! Episode 45 - Continuity Bolts Episode 13 Episode 14 Episode 15 Episode 16 Episode 17 - I write good episode-18 Episode 20 - The Story Grid Episode 21 - Ambien Fiction Episode 22 - My Little Pony Episode 23 - Strategic Quill Locations Episode 24 - Your Cheatin' Heart Episode 25 - Copywork episode-26-podcasts-are-better-than-books Episode 53 - Pump up the Conflicts Episode 54 - Following the Want Episode 52 - Typehammer Turns One Episode 27 - The Scariest Episode Yet Episode 28 - Our Secret Identities Revealed Episode 47 - Get Off My Lawn Episode 29 - Revel in the Crapness Episode 30 - Batman Duct Tape Episode 31 - I Reject your Rejection Episode 32: Benevolent Dictation Episode 33 - Giggling Snowballs Episode 34 - Destroyer of Words Episode 35 - Toss a Gimli Episode 36 - Special Guest John Helfers (Part 1) Episode 37 - Interview with John Helfers, Part 2 Episode 44 - Writing the Detectives Episode 39 - Critiques Episode 40 - Game of Deadlines Episode 41 - Flock of Minions Episode 42 - Trumprotica Episode 43 - Unreliable Narrators
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